Metaphors

[chris900]

here is a littel poem i id for my y7 project and i quit like it because it is made from simalys and metophors

as sweet as suger
it is a bird singing it song
colourful like paint
it is the birds plumage
as swift as a seagull
its a dream come true

[Chocky]

Very nice Chris.
How did it fair in your project. Who is your head of year?.

[chris900]

preaty well my teacher liked it, for the hole project i got a leavel 4 and my head of year is mr bown

[Chocky]

Well done Chris Keep it up. I always say poetry comes from th heart, whether funny or serious.
I don't know Mr Brown. May do by sight unless he's new in the last 6 years.

[chris900]

mr bown came at the end of last year

[digidark]

Is the lady good or is the lady good.No other answer other than yes is acceptable

[Chocky]

mr bown came at the end of last year

Oh. I left the school almost 6 years ago so I wouldn't know Mr Brown. I do know one of the teachers there taught at the school I went to called Haverstock in London. Can't think of the teachers name. I think he's a Home Ec
Any way keep up the good work . Think up some wildlife poems.

Thank you Digidark